Neck in God’s grip
Forcing me forward
Well poised to lift
Me up free from my world
Imagining death
Stubbornly sucking
With all of my breath
My head fills with dust
Neck in God’s grip
Forcing me forward
Well poised to lift
Me up free from my world
Imagining death
Stubbornly sucking
With all of my breath
My head fills with dust
Don Redwood 
You’ve hit a core of such a poetic masterpiece in my point of view.
The picture you choose for this writing fits perfect and you tell it so well.
Excellent imagery you have influenced me for my next writing. 🙂
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Thank you Charlie! You are full of kind words! I illustrated the picture myself, still getting to grips with making graphics so its nice to get good feedback 😊
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Awesome! You make great illustrations. You have an eye for details my friend. 🙂
Your welcome my friend. 🙂 You are an amazing writer. 🙂
P.S I posted something new.
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